Time passes
In increments of
You
Days
Since
We met
Hours
We are
Apart
Each throb
(Of)
My heart
Beating
Pounding
To the rhythm of
Your name
As I
Gasp
Sigh
Want more
Of you
Always
Today, we’d like to challenge you to write a poem that stretches your comfort zone with line breaks. That could be a poem with very long lines, or very short lines. Or a poem that blends the two. You might break to emphasize (or de-emphasize) sounds or rhymes, or to create a moment of hesitation in the middle of a thought.
Photo by Felipe P. Lima Rizo on Unsplash
Get in line Ms. Fine I can rhyme
You sure can
Mister Man
You should join me
In the month of poetry
Really the fun
Has just begun!
“Time passes
In increments of
You”
Those first three lines… the romantic in me is happy. Sigh.
Lovely poem… Hot picture! you do know how to pic em.
Thanks! Looking for the pictures is hard work but someone’s gotta do it!
You are good at it keep it up