Control (Haiku)

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Control (Haiku)

My vaunted control
Shattered by your existence
I cede it freely

13 Comments

  1. NO! Don’t lose yourself in someone else! Sucker….

    But great poem 🙂

    1. Author

      Well there was this ham…
      Thanks 🙂

  2. yeah…. I’m keeping my comments to my self *hums happily* I love both the image and the haiku. I wonder if I should try my hand at a haiku…

    1. Author

      I’m sure you would excel if you cared to try… wait, Sage will appreciate this: ‘Do. Or Do not. There is no try.’

      1. Yoda…how about aj might not like my haiku….She’d have to write. I’m so not poetic

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          Gold star! That’s the thing about haiku, it’s not about rhymes and stanzas. Yeah, it’s a syllable count but it’s, well for me, it’s about saying something, asking something, capturing a moment. I could have written 1500 words on control and letting go of it, but instead I wrote 11. It’s an interesting challenge.

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              That’s ok,you have plenty of other things to do 🙂

                1. Author

                  We prefer the term ‘inspiration’ 😛

    1. Author

      Thank you 🙂

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