Buses And Trains

Buses And Trains

You know it should be criminal
You make me feel so liminal
Our love is so rhetorical
Want to hear it metaphorical
Or a simile so hysterical
It really is a miracle

Falling for you was like falling under a bus
A smear on the pavement, left in your dust
I staggered upright keen to go again
This time it was like being hit by a train

Alex: So the miracle here is that anyone is still reading, right?

Me: (scowling) Go away Alex.

Alex: (grinning) Hey baby?”

Me: (sighs) What?”

Alex: I’m occupying a liminal space right now you know

Me: Really? Do tell.

Alex: Do you sort of want to kill me right now?

Me: Maybe a little bit. Why?

Alex: I’m on the threshold between life and death.

Me: (shakes head) Yeah, I’m liminal too then.

Alex: I’d never kill you babe, you’re safe.

Me: You might not kill me but you almost drive me crazy.

Alex: Only almost? I better try harder!



(in response to the November Notes Writing ChallengeĀ  as hosted by A Reading Writer and Heartstring Eulogies
Today’s song is ‘Buses and Trains’ by Bachelor Girl.)


    1. Author

      Gotta love him (or kill him)!

    1. Author

      Thanks, Alex has that effect šŸ™‚

    1. Author

      Thank you šŸ™‚

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