Criminal

Criminal

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(in response to the November Notes Writing Challenge as hosted by A Reading Writer and Heartstring Eulogies)


I never meant to break him
I watched him for a while
So sweet and young and charming
Breaking hearts with his smile

I thought he could be mine
A place to slake my sin
His body mine to desecrate
A game I played to win

A pretty boy to toy with
My altar sacrifice
He wasn’t meant to bring his heart
I didn’t want that prize

He stood before me broken
A bitter twisted man
Like a criminal I stole his heart
And didn’t give a damn

Now I’m looking for redemption
A way to make things right
But I fear it’s all too late
My lover left me in the night

14 Comments

    1. Author

      Thank you πŸ™‚

    1. Author

      Sorry to disappoint, you’ll have to use your imagination today πŸ˜›

        1. Author

          Didn’t even have the energy to write a little something … besides no one liked my smut last time so I went on strike πŸ™‚

            1. Author

              Yeah I think it was when you were looking after your grandmother

              1. Got it, I have like 400 messages I am slowly working through reading older blogs I missed as well. Some I scan through but the good ones I read and discuss. OR if I’ve nothing to say or add to the discourse I just like it.

                1. Author

                  I don’t get messages, I rely on the reader but then, I probably don’t follow (or read) as prolifically as you. And I rend to like more than comment because … ugh, just because. I appreciate you taking the time to read, comment or just hit that like anyway, so carry on soldier πŸ™‚

    1. Author

      Thank you πŸ™‚

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