Angel – 50 Word Story

Angel – 50 Word Story

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“Come on baby, I want to do it with you.” He grinned over his shoulder at her.

“You do?”

“When will you realise I want to do everything with you?”

“Okay.” She grabbed his hand.

“On three.”

Their wings unfurled as they stepped off the building.

Free at last.

(49 words)

This is my first attempt at a fifty word story. Matthew over at Twisted Roads of Madness does them all the time so I thought I’d challenge myself.

10 Comments

    1. Author

      Sorry, no kilts 😉 Where was I meant to go though? You write it!

        1. Author

          Ahhh! I’m pretty good but not sure how much out that I could do in fifty words 😛

            1. Author

              Okay, 49 words …
              “Come on baby, I want to do it with you.” He grinned over his shoulder at her.
              “You do?”
              “When will you realise I want to do everything with you?”
              She looked at the handcuffs and flogger on the bed, imagined him at her mercy.
              “Okay, let’s do it.”

                1. Author

                  He took it off, still 49 words 😉

                  “Come on baby, I want to do it with you.” He grinned and took off his kilt.
                  “You do?”
                  “When will you realise I want to do everything with you?”
                  She looked at the handcuffs and flogger on the bed, imagined him at her mercy.
                  “Okay, let’s do it.”

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